SLAP!
WHACK!
BLAM!
Let’s shout some life into this verse!
Get the juices flowing!
Is there anything that rhymes with onomatopoeia?
THWAK!
SPLASH!
ZING!
The colorful comic book days of youthful exuberance
fling themselves with wildest abandon
toward the deepest darkest crannies of the mind
PHEW!
CHA-CHING!
PRRAANNGGG!
And searing light splatters itself recklessly
in dozens of dazzling directions!
PA-KOWIE!
love the loud, exuberant word play of this: a great post, Ed !!!!!!
By: johnlmalone on March 10, 2021
at 11:23 pm
Thank you, John. It is a bit silly, of course; kind of the point, I reckon.
By: boromax on March 10, 2021
at 11:45 pm
exactly; it’s also very visual 🙂
By: johnlmalone on March 10, 2021
at 11:48 pm
I perhaps should have left off the line about onomatopoeia; but I was having visions of hippopotamoiea and what not.
By: boromax on March 10, 2021
at 11:59 pm
Haha! Very creative! Made me think of the old Batman series!! ‘Ka-POW!’
By: peachandbatman on March 11, 2021
at 1:52 am
LOL! Yes!
By: boromax on March 11, 2021
at 4:46 pm
WordPress needs a “love” button. I, too, felt like I was watching Batman! Sopapilla rhymes with onomatopoeia.
By: Jeff on March 12, 2021
at 2:06 pm
Thank you, Jeff! And… sopapilla!!! Dang. Now I am craving some, freshly fried with plenty of (local) honey!! Or maybe “stuffed” with meat and cheese!
By: boromax on March 12, 2021
at 6:14 pm
Mmm! That sounds good!
By: Jeff on March 13, 2021
at 2:59 pm