John Malone asked me, “Do you feel a poem coming on?”
My immediate response was, “Oh! I always feel a poem tickling the atmosphere in the labyrinth of my consciousness. I just don’t stop the other stuff I’m doing long enough to breathe and write.”
And here is my further response to John’s prompt:

Poems populate my mindscape
like thousands of clamoring wildflowers
on a sun-bathed hillside.
Tall stalks
crowned with brightly clothed blossoms
dancing in the fragrant wind.
Gathered clusters of blooms
huddled around the strewn rocks;
flower and stone conspiring
to capture my attentions.
Scattered floral starbursts
singing out their beauty
with evident joy
and unequaled fashionability.
Yet it is especially
the tiny sparkling circlets
of pure white petals
that whisper, “Here I am” –
that draw me closer,
to gasp in wonder,
hastening my heart beat,
prompting a long, peace-laden sigh;
that lock themselves into my memory
with color, symmetry, and natural rhythm,
happy to show the world
who they are.
And so I stand
and gaze upon
the lush and lovely flowers
sown upon the windswept hillside.
I love them,
and I leave them
where they are,
nodding and dancing and waving
this way and that,
wondrously arranged,
though randomly sprung up;
a sensuous anthology
of creative, chaotic design.
Gentle, yet persistent,
in the fruitful gardens
of my inmost being.
this is splendid stuff: I’m honoured that I have prompted such a beautiful and tender poem; there is such contrasts here: the noisy, showy flowers and the quiet, demure ones. I love the ‘sensuous anthology’ π glad you’re back posting π
By: johnlmalone on December 22, 2020
at 11:04 pm
Thank you, John. Not to put too fine a point on it, but your simple query truly set something ablaze inside me.
By: boromax on December 22, 2020
at 11:25 pm
I’m glad π
By: johnlmalone on December 22, 2020
at 11:30 pm
Boromax,
Beautiful stuff, brother. Merry Christmas, Gary
On Tue, Dec 22, 2020 at 2:42 PM ~ Trivial Music Silliness ~ wrote:
> boromax posted: ” John Malone asked me, “Do you feel a poem coming on?” My > immediate response was, “Oh! I always feel a poem tickling the atmosphere > in the labyrinth of my consciousness. I just don’t stop the other stuff I’m > doing long enough to breathe and write.” ” >
By: gpavants on December 22, 2020
at 11:20 pm
Thank you, Gary. May you and yours also have a blessed Christmas!
By: boromax on December 22, 2020
at 11:26 pm
Sorry, I just got my message. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
By: gpavants on January 6, 2021
at 1:31 am
I’m enjoying both the poem and the question that prompted it! And also your immediate response. How wonderful to be in a state where you always have a poem on the horizon!
By: jewishyoungprofessional on December 23, 2020
at 12:45 am
Glad you enjoyed it!!
By: boromax on December 23, 2020
at 3:09 am
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By: The Limit of Our Vision | ~ Trivial Music Silliness ~ on December 24, 2020
at 12:42 am
Excellent writing and a very beautiful post β€
By: Will Pennington on January 14, 2021
at 11:40 am
Thank you, Will! π
By: boromax on January 14, 2021
at 3:19 pm
That was breathtaking! It transports you right to the hillside covered in a cacophony of breezy wildflowers!! π
By: peachandbatman on January 17, 2021
at 1:05 am
Thank you, P&B!
By: boromax on January 19, 2021
at 11:11 pm
The mind works in unknowable ways…
Fascinating how a question can spark a deluge of verse
~B
By: Beaton on February 10, 2021
at 9:54 pm
Sparking a deluge… a single word, a sound, a scent, a memory… emotion flowing through the pen (or, you know, the keyboard).
By: boromax on February 10, 2021
at 10:14 pm